Tuesday 24 March 2015

Peer Assessment - Safwana and Yagmur

In today's lesson, we did peer assesment on our music videos. We went around our class and looked at other blogs and videos and filled out a sheet which had different mark bands on it. Specifically, we gave them feedback on composition, editing, shots etc. The group that assessed ours will comment below with their feedback.

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  1. 50/60

    -Artist should be more present/consist throughout video
    -Lighting is hard to analyse but at some points it is a bit evident
    -Video is really jumpy, the shadow part should be placed elsewhere because it feels as though it came out of nowhere and is a bit sudden

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  2. We agree and plan on adding more shots of the artist towards the beginning as we need more performance. We also plan on editing individual shots to improve the lighting.

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